The katakana in the first haiku are an animal onomatopoeia, and a loan word. I choose them because I was making a play on the English way of calling someone a pig when the eat or drink a lot of something. The second usage is a name of a foreign country, chosen because I wanted to talk about a place. The last one is also a loan word, chosen to talk about the concert.
おもしろいですね。このはいくがすきです。I think the last line of your last haiku only has 4 syllables instead of 5. I think the first one is my favorite because I like haikus about coffee :D
I liked the second one the best. Reading the first two line the reader is mislead, and the the third line is the punchline. It was an enjoyable experience reading it.
The katakana in the first haiku are an animal onomatopoeia, and a loan word. I choose them because I was making a play on the English way of calling someone a pig when the eat or drink a lot of something.
ReplyDeleteThe second usage is a name of a foreign country, chosen because I wanted to talk about a place.
The last one is also a loan word, chosen to talk about the concert.
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ReplyDeleteおもしろいですね。このはいくがすきです。I think the last line of your last haiku only has 4 syllables instead of 5. I think the first one is my favorite because I like haikus about coffee :D
ReplyDeleteWow. I am fantastic at counting. And spelling. /fixes
ReplyDeleteそごいですね！
ReplyDelete二はいくがいちばんすてきです。おもしろいですよ。
I liked the second one the best. Reading the first two line the reader is mislead, and the the third line is the punchline. It was an enjoyable experience reading it.
じょうずですね！lol interesting take on the US
ReplyDeleteエミリーさんのコーヒーのぶたがいちばんすきです！It's very creative, and you used the onomatopoeia for the sound that pigs make.
ReplyDeleteすごいですね。はいくがすきです。
ReplyDeleteYour haikus are very cheeky :)
ReplyDeleteI like the second one best as well. Very creative usage of hansomu and amerika. いいですね！